Completed [Competition] Art of The Week

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40 minutes? Bruh? Is that a map or a scene build? Because if it's a scene build I would suck you off

PS: I usually spend 3-5 hours making shit because I never know what I want from my art and spend half of the time fucking around with shit
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I can see some minor issues with the posing, feel free to nitpick other ones and give me feedback.
 
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This is certainly an improvement, your posing is great but I'd work on editing it. This would look great with SDOF and some faceposing on the two background characters. I know the female is placing her hands into her pockets but it looks as if she has no hand. There's also a random fist sticking out of the roof/back of the car? I don't know if it's intentional or not but imo it looks quite strange. Other than that it looks quite good.
 

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This is certainly an improvement, your posing is great but I'd work on editing it. This would look great with SDOF and some faceposing on the two background characters. I know the female is placing her hands into her pockets but it looks as if she has no hand. There's also a random fist sticking out of the roof/back of the car? I don't know if it's intentional or not but imo it looks quite strange. Other than that it looks quite good.

first off, thank you very much >:-), should I do the effects in photoshop or is it possible with just source-filmmaker? Also the fist belongs to the rear drivers hand.
 

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first off, thank you very much >:grinning:, should I do the effects in photoshop or is it possible with just source-filmmaker? Also the fist belongs to the rear drivers hand.
Oh, I thought this was a Garry's Mod pose.

I'm unsure of how editing works in SFM, if there's a way to add DOF then use SFM, though I'm also quite a noob at photoshop.
 

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Oh, I thought this was a Garry's Mod pose.

I'm unsure of how editing works in SFM, if there's a way to add DOF then use SFM, though I'm also quite a noob at photoshop.

what gave you the impression that is was a GMOD pose?
 

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I don't know really, just gives me a raw Garry's Mod vibes as it doesn't contain that much flashy editing that SFM is (afaik) capable of.

hate how low quality the shit is though, in SFM it looks crispy
 

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hate how low quality the shit is though, in SFM it looks crispy
Honestly that's why I mainly use uncompressed facepunch stuff.

Extract the files into gmod and it can look really good.
 

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let me tell ya right now pals, if you have 4k res, dont bother posting it at 4k. there's no point if its not a big detailed scene with shitloads of small details and nitpicks. you're better off just resizing it to 1920x1080 to get that crispy look because you just downscaled.
 
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